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Early rising

March 8, 2013

The daffodil
in the snow
looks awkward
and uncomfortable
as if it
showed up early
to a party
and forgot
to bring a
bottle of wine.

6 Comments leave one →
  1. March 8, 2013 6:41 am

    Delightful interpretation and metaphor. Well done.

  2. March 8, 2013 9:20 am

    Aw! I now can see that poor, out of place, daffodil. 🙂

  3. March 8, 2013 9:23 am

    I really dig your metaphor! It’s relevant and now I’m imagining a stick figure person that looks like a daffodil standing awkwardly in a corner. Thanks for sharing!

  4. March 8, 2013 11:50 am

    Perfect way to express the early bloom…brought a smile to my face…thanks!

  5. March 16, 2013 6:43 am

    How well you described a well known and awkward human situation!

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